I flubbed the perspective a bit on the last panels but it still looks pretty good IMHO. Should probably use horizon lines more in the next storyline.
The first panel felt good to make. It actually started as two panels but I started getting so mad on how to make the speech balloons work that I questioned why I'm making it two panels. Cut it to one and it's so much better. (May have overworked the colors a bit, tho)